A limited use of gadgets can be quite useful for our life. As
we know that now days technology grow up rapidly, if we do not make limitation
use for it, it will exactly make our life change. Many people around the world
use their gadget for social media to know what their friends do or their news
far away, but it makes them forget to how people are in near them. In much fact
they do not be aware with people near them. Using technology without limitation
makes our jobs are neglected because we are too enjoyed with our gadgets. It also
happened to children, they mostly play the game from their gadget that makes no
more sport for them. They also don not know how to interact with others when
they meet, and what gesture they should carry. So limitation in using gadget
will make them more health and know how interact with society. Then, we should
make limitation using of gadget for a good life.
Well-written paragraph I think. But, can you clarify:
ReplyDelete1) What is your main idea?
2) What are the supporting ideas?
3) what type of text did you write?
Thanks and keep blogging
1. A limited use of gadgets can be quite useful for our life
ReplyDelete2. Technology makes them forget to how people are in near them,without limitation makes our jobs are neglected because we are too enjoyed with our gadgets, no more sport for children because gadget/technology.
3. Persuasive text sir.
Thanks for your comment sir, insha Allah I'll do my best
1) Main idea is not a sentence
Delete2) if you have more than one supporting ideas please let me know
Great!